I am going to start pointing out the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city or countryside. One of the major advantages of living in the city are the number of jobs available and the commute to those jobs together with the convenience of public transportation because the citizens have better transport facilities than the people in the countryside have. Villagers need to drive a car to get some canned food because shops are far away from their homes but they always get fresh vegetables and fresh fruits.
Living in the city is fun because there is always something of excitement going on and there are many places in which you can meet with your friends. However, in the countryside you have more friends since It is small, they live in unity and peace and the air is fresh, full of geen hills so the scenery is so calm and beautiful though in the city it is noisy and busy, leading to a bit of stress.
Therefore when you live in the city you keep up with new developments in your profession as well as there are more opportunities for people to progress in their lives and they have more chances for making money.
Coosing where to live depends on your personal preferences, status in life, marital status, and your goals in life.
Well done. You've provided a great argument with clear examples. I feel like your second paragraph should actually be your introduction because it mentions some ideas about both sides of the argument. Then the second sentence of your first paragraph is not really part of the introduction but rather a point in your argument. Also, your conclusion needs an additional sentence in order to completely summarize your ideas
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